Found a bit more gold. Don't know where it fits in the story, though.

There's a gap in the story, a page or two before this is missing I think.

Oh god, that Yoshika-face in panel one.
Reminds me of the bladed gateways in the original Prince of Persia (the DOS version)

ThunderBird said:
Oh god, that Yoshika-face in panel one.
Reminds me of the bladed gateways in the original Prince of Persia (the DOS version)

Oh wow... yeah, I can see that.

CoCoMoo said:
There's a gap in the story, a page or two before this is missing I think.

Just checked the Pixiv description; it's from Myon Myon Typhoon 2, a 28-pager he's selling at Winter Comiket.

ThunderBird said:
Oh god, that Yoshika-face in panel one.
Reminds me of the bladed gateways in the original Prince of Persia (the DOS version)

One of the Pixiv tags is the emoticon >皿< for panel 3. Panel 1 equivalent would be O皿O, I guess.

One of the Pixiv tags is the emoticon >皿< for panel 3. Panel 1 equivalent would be O皿O, I guess.

I'm just gonna call it the "Toothiest, derpiest grin evar". Karaage-san is great at creating faces that are simultaneously cute and funny, his style lends itself to the faces pretty well.

Is there a particular reason the Japanese title for Ten Desires was switched in for the English portion of the title? Since they both represent the same game, I'd say using English would be preferable.

I say so too. I'm going to go ahead, and revert S1eth's edit, given that we already had a full, working translation, so there's no need to edit it further...

Because a translation should reflect the original, not replace it with something totally different. If the Japanese write 神霊廟, they mean it. They can and do sometimes write "Ten Desires", but again, the artist chooses which title he wants to use.

All the fans worldwide are aware of both the titles and subtitles of the games. If an English comic were translated into Japanese, they wouldn't "translate" Ten Desires into 東方神霊廟 either.

Edit: There are also cases in which this won't work at all: when the artist writes 文花帖, 三月精 or 儚月抄 which don't refer to a single game or a single manga.
Or when you translate 非想天 to Scarlet Weather Rhapsody and the artist then adds a 則 on the next page/panel.

S1eth said:
Because a translation should reflect the original, not replace it with something totally different. If the Japanese write 神霊廟, they mean it. They can and do sometimes write "Ten Desires", but again, the artist chooses which title he wants to use.

All the fans worldwide are aware of both the titles and subtitles of the games. If an English comic were translated into Japanese, they wouldn't "translate" Ten Desires into 東方神霊廟 either.

You're not wrong there but somehow it doesn't feel quite right either.

The_Shadow said:
You're not wrong there but somehow it doesn't feel quite right either.

Well, there never really was a "Right" way to translate. Espeically when we start getting into "Localized" translations.

This is most definitely a different doujin or later pages since myon is there...

VocaUtau said:
This is most definitely a different doujin or later pages since myon is there...

There is a gap, but no Myon. That's just Seiga's shawl or the tassel on Youmu's katana.

If she's half baked and now missing her myon, does that mean she's a quarter baked?

What happened to this series? I've been waiting forever to see what happens! Did the artist drop it?

More likely simply opted not to post the rest on his/her Pixiv page.

Thanks for the translations, Moonspeaker. Now this page makes much more sense.

I don't remember the specifics, but isn't resurrecting Yuyuko a bad thing?

sukecchi said:
Thanks for the translations, Moonspeaker. Now this page makes much more sense.

I don't remember the specifics, but isn't resurrecting Yuyuko a bad thing?

I don't think she can be resurrected in the first place, due to the Youkai Cherry Tree sealing her soul as she seals the tree.
However, if she can be revived, she'd still be buried under the tree, which would be free to bloom and start killing people again...

NOW this makes sense.