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  • ID: 2673976
  • Uploader: NWSiaCB »
  • Date: over 8 years ago
  • Approver: .grey »
  • Size: 230 KB .jpg (800x1135) »
  • Source: dmzj.com/info/jinglingzhidan.html »
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  • NWSiaCB
    over 8 years ago
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    Incidentally: Called it. (Two chapters almost to the exact page...) This series is officially a wacky harem series.

    POST-TRANSLATION EDIT: So, not only does the lack of stated motivation mean that having Roland in the harem is an unwanted tagalong that had to be forced upon Adelanta, but Ataline's reward for all this is getting to keep the other unwanted harem member without legal complications... See how not having stated goals creates problems in writing justifications for why things are happening? Everything needs to be contrived to force the main character to do anything and be forced into keeping the cast together.

    Updated by NWSiaCB over 8 years ago

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    Rice 22
    over 8 years ago
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    NWSiaCB said:

    And money. Also, Roland still has her job that she has to go to, but yes she's mostly unwanted. Not that she cares, since her motivation for turning into a woman is getting a new body that's not terribly injured.

    Atlanta is reactive and not driving in the plot, despite being the main character. This is true.

    However, as you said earlier, his years of scheming has already paid off. He got Mickey who he likes to be his partner, and he won his duel so he gets the right to pork her instead of her him. His goal has already been achieved in the first chapter, so now he's mostly dealing with what life has in store for him.

    I like how we can talk so seriously about a comedy series, since the social implications of such a system in reality is so vast and potentially horrible.

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    Blindga
    over 8 years ago
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    NWSiaCB said:

    ...Everything needs to be contrived to force the main character to do anything and be forced into keeping the cast together.

    I feel like this should go without saying. Isn't that what most fiction works basically are?

    I think I get what you mean though.

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    njpr231
    over 8 years ago
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    I smell the coming of Darkness mk II

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    No matter what she's still got to express her thanks...
    The great saviour of the Kingdom is here for a visit!
    Speaking of which, it's all because of you that Roland managed to live on.
    Hey! Anyone miss me?
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