Fate. Sooo cute.

Hehe, she's so wet in the lower right panel and she looks like she came in the lower left one.
But yeah fate looks pretty cute in the lower right one. She should blush more.

Anyone got the full version?
Or a hint on how to find it?

the rest of the doujin is begin edited and translated. I'll post the rest as soon as it comes out

If you post the originals here, someone else will translate it using the 'notes' system. We'd probably prefer it that way, actually.

I'll do that, but I'm still going to post the edited and translated version

The point is, you really aren't supposed to post the edited and translated version.

You know, it would actually look much better if you just used the note system to write your translation.

There's absolutely no reason why you can't post both.

Did I wander into Wikipedia by accident or something? Stop inventing imaginary rules like "no hard translations".

If you have hard translations and want to post them, go ahead and do it. Just parent/pool and tag them appropriately and *also* post the unedited versions.

Uh, but we do actually _strongly_ prefer untranslated versions. One is that it's way less intrusive, and two is that there are enough crappy translators roaming freely on the net that wanting originals is not at all unreasonable. And once you have that translated with notes, hard edits are just unnecessary duplication.

Oh god, Fate's expressions are friggen gold!