Took a shot at translating this one. I know I got the first part right, but I'm not so sure about the other half. If you could let me know, that'd be great!
Took a shot at translating this one. I know I got the first part right, but I'm not so sure about the other half. If you could let me know, that'd be great!
Solid direct translation, though I think you missed the intent behind the distinction of kocchi and socchi as being in opposition to each other.
