For the record, the concept for this comic is "What if Okuu hadn't met Reimu and decided to invade the surface to turn it into a hell, like she said she wanted to do during her dialogue in SA?"

I'll translate the actual comic text if these posts get approved, but the art is so mediocre that I don't see that happening.

If the dialog is worth it
I'd say keep it, Looking kinda promising so far lol