Huh. I thought OP was tagging wrong when I saw rochestedorm tagged- They usually only do 3D stuff to my memory.
These edits are pretty alright, but Danbooru isn't the place for content like this. The only posts that get a pass for utilizing screenshots are official promo art. You'd be better off uploading the assets raw, like post #6659788. post #6659790 could also be accepted, but I can't put my finger on why it wouldn't get approved exactly.
Also, this isn't e621 or rule34.xxx. You can't place multiple sources in the source field, sadly.